Thank you!

Based on your feedback, and your attention to detail, I've asked the illustrator to make the following changes to the initial set of illustrations (found here: https://online.fliphtml5.com/hjzlc/rzzp/)

• Illustration 1 - No changes

• Illustration 2 - Baby needs to be wearing the same yellow striped onesie worn in the other images

• Illustration 3 - Remove pillow under baby's head. The pillow isn't in the other illustrations, and it's not currently recommended for safe sleeping

• Illustration 4 - No changes

• Illustration 5 - Language change because "contracting" is too advanced for a newborn (my fault). New script should be changed from "I'm contracting here, no actually there," to "I'm squeezing here, no rumbling there,"

• Illustration 6 - The frustration in illustration 6 might be a bit of a downer for parents. Rework their expressions to be still be tired but have more of a playful frustration/amused exasperation vibe. Like a playful "oh no-not again!" type of vibe to keep the image realistic but more upbeat

Appreciate your continued support. Will send another update once the next set of illustrations (which will include the Fake Hunger monster scenes) are complete. 

-Tully-