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The Fifth Claw

Azrael Tseng

Ryu is a four-clawed dragon that desperately wants to come to Earth, where it is said dragons are treated as gods. But only the Great Four-Headed Dragon can grant that wish, or is there another way? With only a talking stone for a companion, Ryu sets out to realize a seemingly impossible dream.

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Synopsis

Everyone knows about dragons - they have bat-like wings and breathe fire. But how many people know about Oriental dragons that fly without wings and hide a pearl that contains their essence beneath their chins? 

Similarly movie-goers around the world are well-versed in the kungfu exploits of Bruce Lee, Jackie Chan, and other stars, but is kungfu really all about being better at beating someone else up?

'The Fifth Claw' puts the reader into the clawed feet of an Oriental dragon in the dragon realm, who wants to come to Earth and be worshipped as a god. In typical quest fantasy fiction fashion, ne sets out on a quest in order to open up a portal. But it is the journey, not the destination that will allow nem to discover what ne is truly searching for, and losing in the process.

The story introduces the reader to a world where kungfu is a way of life, and offers insights into some Asian philosophies, such as the I-Ching. It expands on a rich library of literature and lore that the Western world still knows little, or harbor severe misconceptions, about.

Outline

* Please note the use of the gender neutral pronouns 'ne', 'nem', and 'nir' in place of 'he/she', 'him/her', and 'his/her'. Dragons from the dragon realm are sexless, and are born from divine breath.

Chapter 1: The Two Masters
Ryu has the best kungfu skills of the Qian dragon sect, but never seems to get the approval of Shifu.  Shigong knows Ryu's insecurities about having one fewer claw than other dragons, and lets Ryu borrow nir dragon pearl, hoping it will teach the young dragon a lesson about power.
Chapter 2: The Power of the Pearl
The dragon disciples gossip about what powers their pearls possess, and Ryu finds out that having one pearl from each of the eight dragon sects is supposed to open a portal to Earth. Unable to show off a pearl that does not belong to nem, Ryu confides in Shin, a talking stone that ne animated. 
Chapter 3: The Assassin
On the way to returning the pearl, Ryu is set upon by an assailant. Shigong rescues nem and kills the dragon assassin, but is poisoned in the process. Ne is helped to the sacred spring to slow the spread, but requires Shifu to help purge the poison. Instead of fetching Shifu, Ryu decides to run away with a pouch of dragon pearls from three different dragon sects on the body of the assassin.
Chapter 4: Through the Marshes
Ryu makes nir way towards the Dui dragon sect with only the talking stone Shin for company. Ne is beset by dehydration but manages to survive to reach the wet marshlands of the Dui. There ne experiences some fleeting happiness playing in the water. 
Chapter 5: The Way of the Lake
Ryu challenges the Dui dragon sect to a duel. The Dui Shigong questions Ryu's intentions, but finally allows the fight to take place. Ryu is injured by dragon breath, but still manages to win the fight. When ne tries to claim the vanquished dragon's pearl as nir prize, the Dui Shigong gives up nir own pearl instead.
Chapter 6: Fighting Fire
Unable to heal fully from nir injuries, Ryu struggles to find the next dragon sect temple located across the Fiery Sea. When ne finally manages to do so, ne realizes that ne would not be able to win a duel against a fit Li dragon. Instead ne resorts to ambushing the weakest one of them with poison, following the footsteps of the assassin that had started this journey.
Chapter 7: An Unexpected Companion
With six pearls now in nir possession, Ryu finds nemself in the canyons of the Zhen. Ne has a strange heart-to-heart conversation with Shin, during which ne finds out how Shin wants to be more than just a stone with a mouth. They meet Sandi, a three-clawed dragon with an unusual ability.
Chapter 8: When Lightning Strikes Earth
Following Sandi to the Zhen temple, they chase down some lightning strikes to a shower burst. They are spotted by a Zhen dragon, whom Ryu challenges to a duel while Sandi slips away undiscovered. Trusting in nir poisoned claws to achieve victory, Ryu is unprepared for the Zhen dragon using ranged lightning attacks. Ne is wracked and on the verge of death from the Zhen lightning attack, when Sandi rescues nem by snatching away the Zhen dragon's pearl. With Zhen reinforcements inbound, Ryu uses Shigong's dragon pearl to help Sandi and nemself escape.
Chapter 9: The Last Pearl
Ryu and Sandi make their way towards the Qian, and Ryu reveals to Sandi nir intention for collecting the pearls. Sandi decides to help nem fulfill nir dream.

Audience

Fans of quest fantasy, Asian mythology and kungfu who might enjoy reading a blend of these elements. There are literally hundreds of millions of fantasy fans out there, and while most of them are devoted followers of established writers, surely there are enough who want a taste of something familiar, and yet somewhat different.

Promotion

I will promote the book aggressively on Facebook, and ask my friends to help spread the word as well.  Writing.com, and will use that online community to promote the book, and search for other ways to spread awareness online. 

Competition

1. Dragons of Autumn Twilight, by Margaret Weis and Tracy Hickman, published February 1st 2000 by Wizards of the Coast (first published 1984). The first book in the Dragonlance Chronicles and Legends series that popularized fantasy and dragons all over the world. Weis and HIckman created the world of Krynn, spawning countless knockoffs and inspiring many to populate their world with new stories.

(Dragonlance and The Fifth Claw each has a unique dragon world, populated by different species of dragons. But where Krynn's dragons are distinguished by biological makeup and alignments, the dragons of The Fifth Claw are divided by sects according to the eight diagrams of the I-Ching. It draws on Eastern philosophies, lore and influences instead of Western ones.)

2.  Dragonflight, by Anne McCaffrey, published July 26th 2005 by Del Rey (first published 1968). Before there was Dragonlance, the fantasy genre appealed to a small niche audience. Out of that small body of works, the Dragonriders of Pern series is probably the best known to focus on dragons, and present them not just as stereotypical treasure-hoarding monsters.

(In The Fifth Claw, dragons do not share the protagonist role with humans, nor do they deign to allow humans to ride on them. Dragons are worshipped in the East as bringers of blessings and good fortune, and are depicted as such here.)

3.  The Last Unicorn, by Peter S. Beagle, published July 2008 by Penguin Roc (first published 1968). One of the best and most famous quest fantasy books ever, a lonely unicorn sets out to find others of its kind. She is joined on the way by two companions, and at the end meets the one person trying to exterminate all of her kind.

(Structurally The Fifth Claw is similar to The Last Unicorn, since they both adhere to the quest fantasy story style. You have the quest, you have the two mismatched companions, you have the discovery of a world very different from our own. You also have lots of violence and conflict typical of the genre. The difference here is that The Fifth Claw, the violence is a mix of kungfu and magical powers.)

4.  Pawn of Prophecy, by David Eddings, published June 1st 2004 by Del Rey (first published 1982). The first book of the Belgariad series, which was followed by the virtually identical Malloreon series. In typical epic quest fantasy fashion, Garion sets out to save the world from the evil god Torak. He is joined by the goddess Polgara, and two other companions, to fulfill a prophecy and discover his fate.
(In The Fifth Claw, Ryu has no grand quest to save the world or fulfill any prophecy. Ne is on a selfish quest, and even resorts to despicable means to achieve nir goal. There is no clear-cut good vs evil, and Ryu's actions are sometimes 'evil', although they are done out of desperation and necessity rather than malice. What makes The Fifth Claw similar to Eddings' epic series are the interactions between the protagonist and the companions, that really serve to flesh out their characters.)

5.  Tiger, by Jeff Stone, published March 14th 2006 by Yearling (first published January 1st 2005). The first book of the Five Ancestors series, about a 12-year old kungfu disciple Fu who escapes the destruction of his temple. Together with his brothers, he sets out to discover the secrets of his past.

(The kungfu elements and settings are similar, as well as the search for the past, as Ryu is originally from Earth and wishes to return home. What is different is that the protagonist in The Fifth Claw is dragon, not human. Also as an Asian brought up in Asian culture, well-versed in the popular works of kungfu novelist Louis Cha, the author of The Fifth Claw writes about the world of kungfu, called jianghu, and Asian mythology from an insider's point of view and understanding.)

Azrael Tseng

About the author

Azrael was born in Singapore, where he picked up 'leet' skills in snobbery at the top schools in the tiny country. He has as many complexes as turbulent teenage years spent sleeping on the streets, escaping sexual predators, and encountering the supernatural will give someone. Proud to be a beneficiary of a national bilingual policy (English and Mandarin), he has also acquired passing fluency in French, German, as well as Japanese, granting him pseudo-polyglot status in Egoland.
Always a writer at heart, it was not until the birth of his son Lynx that he actually began to write. He has created the 'Was Eternal' universe in a science-fiction series, and has expanded on Oriental mythology through 'The Fifth Claw'. Other projects include a young adult novel about gender issues, as well as a collection of short horror stories that chronicle the lives and deaths of ordinary Singaporeans. His plays include 'Color Me Gonzo: The Life and Rant of Hunter S Thompson' and some of his recent portfolio can be viewed at https://thewordswebreathe.wordpress.com/

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The Fifth Claw, Chapter Two: The Power of the Pearl

The dragon pearl was rumored to have many powers. It could grant life and longevity, bestow all manners of blessings, and confer wisdom upon its bearer. Each was supposed to have a unique power that could only be manifest in the human world, and the disciples enjoyed trying to guess what theirs would be.
“I heard that if you combine a pearl from each of the eight dragon sects, you would possess unimaginable power. The ability to bring the dead back to life!”
“Or even open up another portal to the human world!”
“No one can send a dragon to the human world, except the Great Four-Headed Dragon,” Sei scoffed at the suggestion. “Ne guards the only way there and back, right at the center of this world.”
“Well, maybe there is another way.”
“Yeah, if you can get eight dragon pearls together. You don’t even know how to get to the next sect.”
“There are eight sects out there, and only four directions – front, back, left, and right. Just pick any direction and you’ll find two that way.”
“Dragons are supposed to be smart, Hanriu. Have you any idea how undragonlike you sound?”
“Well, even if you find your way to the other sects, which dragon do you think is just going to hand over their precious pearl, and say, ‘There you go. Have fun now bringing your dead xianbei to life. I’m off to get me another pearl.’”
“Well, it is said that in the age before now, the Age of Might, dragons went around from sect to sect challenging other dragons to a contest of their martial skills. The victor could demand anything of the vanquished, even their pearls.”
“Sei could do that. I’m sure nir Dragon Pearl Roll technique would beat the other sects!”
“When are you going to become Shizi?”
“Shifu says that if I keep up my practice, it might be as soon as a hundred years.” Being Shizi before one was two thousand years old was an incredibly rare achievement and certainly one to take pride in, but Sei had never been one to boast. Some dragons were incredibly proud, but Ryu had never met such a one among the Qian sect.
“A hundred years! I wouldn’t even have my horns grown out yet.”
Ryu always pretended not to pay any attention to the small talk, and no one ever paid any attention to nem. They simply treated nem as if ne wasn’t there, and that arrangement suited nem just fine. It wasn’t that ne didn’t enjoy company, or social conversation. However ne always thought things changed when ne got involved, and not in a good way. They tried not to show it but it was clear to nem that ne didn’t belong. Ne had no fifth claw like everyone else. And ne was sure they all knew ne had no pearl. Ne was the only one never to talk about it, or show it off like the other disciples did.
Because I had no pearl to show off.
Yet now that ne had one, ne did not quite know what to do with it. No one would believe it was nirs. Everyone knew the size and luster of the pearl reflected the wisdom and power of the dragon it belonged to. Sei had the largest and brightest pearl among all the thirteen disciples in Qian sect. Ne was, after all, the oldest at a thousand six hundred and forty-seven years, and already had well-developed horns that marked nem as a chi-lung. Even though Bakkyo dwarfed everyone else in physical size and strength, nir pearl was only of average size and one of the dullest. It glowed a monstrous blood-red, and was the only one amongst theirs of that particular coloration. Sei’s was a twin-banded silver-gold, and everyone else’s was some variation of gold. Gold was the traditional color of the Qian tien lung.
Shigong’s pearl, mine, appeared as various shades of that most precious of colors all at once. When ne peered closer, ne thought ne could see all kinds of images in it. Things that were not rocks sticking out of the ground, with hair made of eyes that were green, red and yellow. A sky that was not always dark and burning, but changed color to a clear azure. Creatures that were not dragons drinking from pools, streams and rivers. Oh so much water everywhere!
It was fascinating, and Ryu knew ne was looking at scenes from the human world. Ne yearned to talk about it, and there was only one who’d listen. One who’d been made to do just that.
Ne would have to sneak out of the temple for that. Not a terribly difficult task when no one ever paid attention to you. Ne cast a surreptitious look in the direction of the chattering disciples, gathered in the middle of the resting chamber. No one would notice even if ne suddenly jumped up and performed a display of histrionics. And no one did when ne silently slinked off.
The temple was a majestic edifice of rock that towered over every neighboring peak. It was known to be the highest point in this entire world. Since every mountain pointed inward towards the Airy Core, the apex of the Qian temple was the closest one could get to the center of the world, where the portal to the human world was. Ryu had lived nir entire life in the temple, but ne had always felt the portal to be agonizingly out of reach.
It mattered not how close one actually got to it. The portal was guarded by the Great Four-Headed Dragon, which formed an impermeable range of mountains that completely closed off it off. The only way to get to it was if one was let through. Only the most powerful five-clawed tien lung were allowed the privilege of being sent to the human world. Outcasts like nemself stood no chance of even being considered.
Ryu made nir way down to the Stone Gardens. With the entire world barren and populated mainly by rock, melted rock, and re-solidifying rock, there was absolutely nothing remarkable about the place. The only thing that distinguished it from other rocky places was that the stones here were sculpted and carefully arranged in various patterns. The Stone Gardens surrounded the Qian temple on all sides. There were eight sections, with each neatly bounded to one of the temple’s octagonal faces. Each corresponded to the different dragon sects, and displayed all kinds of collected relics and literature of that sect.
Every disciple had to learn about all the other dragon sects. They would begin with the Qian at the most inward face pointed directly towards the Airy Core, as Shifu had drilled through endless repetitions that ‘the beginning of all knowledge is the understanding of oneself’. Then they would go on to the Kun sect at the opposite end. ‘There is nothing only black or white, or even gray. Nothing has only one face.’ The order in which the others were learnt about was not strictly enforced, but left to the preferences of either the master or the student.
The spot Ryu headed for was not in any of the sections. It was right on the boundary between the Kan and the Xun sections, at the very periphery of the Stone Gardens. The periphery was marked by a low wall of packed stones that acted more as a visual marker than as protection or deterrence, since it could be stepped over easily. It was beyond this wall that Ryu reached for a stone that rested against it from the outside, that no one would ever pay attention or notice to.
“Shin,” Ryu addressed the stone, breathing over it as ne did so.
“Huh, what? Who’re you? How do you know my name?” Came a sputtering response.
“I made you. I gave you life. And your name,” Ryu explained, with the merest hint of impatience.
It happened every time. Shin never remembered who ne was, or even what they had talked about the last time, but that suited nem fine as well. If questioned, Shin would give nothing away. Shifu had always warned against using the gift of divine breath to create life lightly, and would surely punish nem if ne found out. Ryu had never understood the fuss. Power was given for a reason – to be used, not to be hidden away or ignored.
“Look at this.” And Shigong’s golden pearl was produced from its hiding place.
When Ryu had first shaped Shin, ne had fashioned only a slit for a mouth and a hole for an ear. Ne had not wanted to be identified. It was only after ne realized that Shin would remember nothing anyway that ne had decided to carve out an eye. That eye now widened until it was the entire expanse of itself, squeezing its ear and mouth out of sight.
“Now that is simply gorgeous. Do you mind if I spend some time alone with it, get to know it a little better?” Shin winked slyly at nem.
“Are you nuts? This is a dragon pearl, and you’re just a stone.” Despite being Shin’s creator, Ryu had absolutely no idea, and no control over whatever it was going to say. It was the only thing that ever managed to surprise nem.
“And you’re just a four-clawed dragon that wants to go to the other side,” came Shin’s sardonic comment.
Ryu never shared, but Shin somehow always knew exactly what was hidden in nir heart, or unspoken in nir mind.
“It’s where I belong.” Ryu’s reply was curt and cutting. It was odd how a stone could rile nem, when everything else could not.
“Ever heard the saying ‘Home is where the heart is’? You belong with me,” Shin smacked nem a kiss. “But I really don’t mind if you take a long, slow walk around. Far away. Think about it. Oh, and uh, leave that beauty behind.”
No one Ryu knew talked the way Shin did, and ne was convinced that it came from the other world, from the humans. Like nem, Shin was a fragment of that world, out of place in this one.
“It’s mine.” At least until tomorrow.
“Hey, what’s mine is yours, what’s yours is mine, right? Of course I don’t actually have anything, but you are welcome to that. Wow, it is huge! Are you sure it’s yours? How do you even fit it down that pointy chin of yours?” Shin prattled.
Ryu demonstrated, hiding it beneath nir chin and then revealing it. “It can’t be seen, unless you want it to be.”
“And why wouldn’t you want to show off that piece of perfection? If it was me, I’d take that to town and paint it gold.”
Ryu had no idea what a town was. It was odd that Shin seemed to know about things that ne had never ever heard of or learnt about. But the question it had asked was one that had been on nir mind all that time.
“Because it’s not really mine. Everyone would know if I showed it off. It’s Shigong’s.”
“Whoever that is is one lucky dragon,” Shin remarked with envy. “It is a dragon, right?”
Ryu did not bother to answer. Shin’s responses were always irreverent, usually impertinent, and often confusing. However talking to it somehow managed to help nem get the answers ne sought. There was no pride in passing off Shigong’s pearl as nir own. Even if the other disciples somehow all went agape over it, what would ne do with all that temporary envy anyway? No, even if Shigong let nem keep the pearl forever, it didn’t feel right. Whatever emptiness had been there before was still there. A pearl a hundred times bigger wouldn’t be able to fill that void.
Shigong had probably known that was what ne would learn. That was why ne had let nem have the pearl. Ryu felt manipulated somehow. Ne detested doing what ne was supposed to, or learning what others intended nem to. Without nir own pearl, ne already felt soulless enough, and now they would rob nem of nir will as well? Ne determined to return the pearl at first light the next day.
The moment the ground turns bright.
Returning the pearl to its hiding place, ne picked Shin up to place it back outside the low wall.
“Aww, already? We were just starting to hit it off. Can’t you give me another moment with that beauty? Cos I got this feeling inside all tingly that’s telling me that I’m never gonna get to have another chance like this again. Pleeeease?” Shin begged whiningly.
Ryu stared at the stone clutched within nir claw. Ugly and imperfect though it was, it was nonetheless nir creation, born of nir breath and shaped by nir will. Compared to the brilliant jewel that beamed with smug awareness of its potency and value, this deformed and incoherent rock was the more beautiful. Ne would grant its wish, simply because ne could.
“One night,” Ryu stated.
Then ne tucked the stone next to the pearl and returned to the temple.


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